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German adventure in the Poland Hi today my charitable homework is about adventure. I have written a tale about one journey. NJOY Soundtrack : http://youtu.be/c9SN96v1Mec Klaus was German coming back to the home – Berlin. He had met many friends in Poland. One of them was Natalia. They had fallen into love and promised to each over to meet in the next summer. Klaus liked hitching. He thought that it gave many opportunities to meet foreign cultures. That day, the weather was terrible. Heavy rain and thunderstorm effectively impeded hitching. He couldn’t see anything for more than 20 meters. Drivers saw young and weird man. His clothes were completely wet. Suddenly, big lorry has stopped. Klaus filled with feeling of happiness jumped into lorry and was shocked. Everywhere there were () teddy bears. Billions of thoughts were rushing around Klaus head. Driver asked about destination of Klaus travel. Anyway, our German friend heard something like that. In the moment, magic word was said “Berlin”. “Something is wrong. If I will go with him, he can kill me or something worse”. On the over hand, he could return outside and run away through the bolts. “Berlin?” asked Klaus to make sure himself. Driver smiled and confirmed “Berlin”. But he said it in strange way. Anyway, they were going for 3 hours. Then, Zbyszek (driver) said that was end of the journey. Klaus thought, he must have drive very fast. There were 600 km to Berlin from Cracow. He thanked to Zbyszek and went through the Berlin subway. “wo ist der U-Bahn?”. Asked man was wondered and said „It is Poland my friend. You should go to the Warsaw if you wanna travel by subway”. Klaus was shocked. He lost his breath. But Klaus was practiced by hitching. He looked around and suddenly he set his eyes on big broad LUBLIN. He moved to the opposite way and landed 900 km from Berlin – in Lublin.

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It was a very long story, so I only corrected some of it! I hope this helps! 

 

 

Klaus was a German coming back to the home to Berlin. He had met many friends in Poland. One of them was Natalia. They had fallen into love and promised to eachother to meet in the that they would meet up next summer.

Klaus liked hitching hitchhiking. He thought that it gave him many opportunities to meet learn about foreign cultures. That day, the weather was terrible. Heavy rain and thunderstorms effectively impeded hitching a ride. He couldn’t see anything for more than 20 meters. There were drivers that saw the young and weird man. His clothes were completely wet.

Suddenly, big lorry ? has stopped. Klaus was filled with feeling of happiness and jumped into lorry ? and was shocked. Everywhere there were () teddy bears There were teddy bears everywhere. Billions of thoughts were rushing around Klaus's head. The driver asked about destination of Klaus travel where Klaus was going. 

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