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About me
Hello there, thank you for being here.I’m not the best at talking about myself, but I’ll give it a shot for you.
I live in Yokohama City in Japan. I spent most of my time visiting Kanazawa prefecture.
When I was a child, I liked taking pictures. I took pictures on many occasions.(1)
Then I went to camera school at Nihonkougakuin.
Now I am Professional photographer and Cinematographer.
I have a lot of experience in various fields such as TV, cm(2), events, portfolio, sports and music, etc.
I especially like taking pictures of people, because everyone has their own life story.
I want to express your life with pictures.
I want to see your best smile.
I want to see your best story, and capture it.(3)
Thank you for being here and taking the time to look through the stories I’ve photographed.
I’m blessed enough to be able to combine my love for photography with the things that
I feel are meaningful, and I’m so grateful for all the couples who have placed their trust in me.
If you feel connected with what I do, please don’t be shy to say hello. I would love to talk more with you.
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(1) I chose [occasions] here, which means a particular event, or certain moments in time. It sounds like you wanted to say that you took pictures of many moments in your life. Other ways to say that are: "I took a lot of pictures growing up." or "I took pictures whenever I could."
(2) I am not sure what you mean by cm. Cinema? The abbreviation as it stands means [centimeter], which I am sure you didn't mean to say.
(3) [to capture] is a verb often used together with photography. In this sentence, it means that you want to see someone's best story, and grasp it by taking a picture of it.
This is very well done! Your love for photography is clear. Most of your errors are in sentence order, prepositions and verbs.
Thank you for sharing your story, and keep up the great work!
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