college students should choose their major based on talent
Some people propose that students should choose majors based on their talent while others indicate that the availability of the job market may be more important. In my opinion, I think the talent should be the main factor for students to decide their majors.
For one thing, if students have talent in some areas, they are more likely to be successful. Examples from famous people can illustrate this point. Nash, one of the prominent mathematicians, acquired the Nobel Prize in 1994 because of his significant contribution to the game theory. Nash had showed his talent in math when he was a little child. He even can solve some problems puzzling his teachers. The other example comes from Edison, who was an inventor promoting the development of our society. His invention, telephone and bulb, had improved the life quality of people all over the world. It is his genus that allows him to possess accurate inspection that ordinary people do not own. Therefore, Edison could always have marvelous ideas and make it come true. Overall, only choosing majors that students are really interested in, can they have the opportunity to get the peak of their career.
Meanwhile, when students regard as their career the major they are skilled in, they will easier get confidences. If entering into an area where you have weakness, you will always fail. As time passes, you may lose your self-confidence and afraid to do anything. It will block the development of your career.
Some people may propose that the demand of the major in job market, is also an important factor that should be taken into consideration. Students majoring in philosophy and history are difficult to find a job. I admit that this reason cannot be ignored, but it should follow students' talent. If students indeed have talent in some cold areas, they can also create the glory. My sister, whose major is history, has become the youngest professor in Peking University. She has genius in history since she was child as she can remember over 100 names of the kings. Thus, the reason why some students cannot find a job is probably that they choose an unsuitable major.
Overall, I think that students should choose the sphere that they are talent in, because it will bring them the success, the confidence and the pleasure.
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"the peak of his career"=the best moment in his career// "the summit of his field"=the best person in his field Meanwhile, when students regard as their career the major they are skilled in, they will easier get confidences.become confident more easily/ become more confident. If entering into you enter an area where you have weakness are weak, you will always fail. As time passes, you may lose your self-confidence and become afraid to do anything. It will block the development of your career.
Some people may propose that the demand of for the major in the job market is also an important factor that should be taken into consideration. It is difficult for students majoring in philosophy and or history are difficult to find a job. I admit that this reason fact cannot be ignored, but it should follow come second to students' talent. If students indeed have talent in some cold areas, they can also create the rise to glory. My sister, whose major is history, has become the youngest professor in at Peking University. Wow! Wow! Congratulations! //"in"=countries and cities, "at"=companies and colleges 如: “She works at Peking University in Beijing.”She has been a genius in history since she was a child, as she can remember over 100 names of the kings. Thus, the reason why some students cannot find a job is probably that they choose an unsuitable major.
Overall, I think that students should choose the sphere that they are talented in, because it will bring them the success, the confidence and the pleasure.
Some people may propose that the demand of for the major in the job market is also an important factor that should be taken into consideration. It is difficult for students majoring in philosophy and or history are difficult to find a job. I admit that this reason fact cannot be ignored, but it should follow come second to students' talent. If students indeed have talent in some cold areas, they can also create the rise to glory. My sister, whose major is history, has become the youngest professor in at Peking University. Wow! Wow! Congratulations! //"in"=countries and cities, "at"=companies and colleges 如: “She works at Peking University in Beijing.”She has been a genius in history since she was a child, as she can remember over 100 names of the kings. Thus, the reason why some students cannot find a job is probably that they choose an unsuitable major.
Overall, I think that students should choose the sphere that they are talented in, because it will bring them the success, the confidence and the pleasure.
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college students should choose their major based on talent
Some people propose that students should choose majors based on their talent,while others indicate that the availability of number of openings in the job market may be more important. In my opinion, I think the talent should be the main factor for students to decide their majors. driving a student's choice of major.For one thing, if students have talent in some areas, they are more likely to be successful in them. Examples from famous people can illustrate this point. Nash, one of the prominent mathematicians, acquired the Nobel Prize in 1994 because of his significant contribution to the game theory. Nash had showed shown his talent in math when he was a little child. He even can could even solve some problems puzzling that puzzled his teachers. The other Another example comes from Edison, who was an inventor promoting who promoted the development of our society. OR: ...promoted societal development His inventions, such as the telephone and the lightbulb, had improved the life quality of quality of life for people all over the world. "quality of life" is a set phrase// we use past perfect for something that happened before the main action of the story. "Jim had eaten before he started to run." It is was his genius that allowed him to possess accurate inspection that ordinary people do not own gave him greater insight than that of ordinary people. Therefore, Edison could always have marvelous ideas and make it them come true. Overall, only by choosing majors that students they are really interested in can they students have the opportunity to get to the peak summit of their career.
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I could not agree more.
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