Corrections · 4
1.Blew a tire
Part of speech: Verb
Definition: the Tyre was broke and blew up.
My sentence: My car was blew a tire when I was in the an intersection. Oh, I have no idea and I don’t know what should I going to I should do: Is My car still safety?
2.Herding
Part of speech: Verb
Definition: make the sheep or other animals to that eat grass, make them clump together, or make them move forward in one direction.
My sentence: I am a shepherd, my work is to herding sheep in on our ranch and don’t lose them every time keeping them from getting lost. It’s my job and I should to love it.
red=mistakes that need to be corrected=写错了,得改一改
blue=sounds better=听起来更好
green=my comments=注释
Summary of key points:
This conversation said that a woman spent over two hours in the bus station to took take a long-distance bus and met a strange man in on the bus. The man’s tone is was very weird, and he told her this bus had broken down about 50 miles back. The woman felt worried and asked the man where does him comes he came from. He said he is a was adopted and living in Las Vegas, and that this trip is was to go back to there to visit his new parents. But the woman found out she took a had taken the wrong bus, and she wanted to go to Chicago in a the opposite direction. The man told her to relax and he can said that he could teach her how to milk a cow and invited her to live in on a farm, and the woman feeling felt a little bit angry and have had to get off the bus. 用逗号来接两个分句时,需要加连词如 “and”, "or", "but", 等。
Personal reflection/observation:
The man is very crazy and weird. He can’t understand the woman’s angry and anxious mood, and he was so boring and annoying that the woman cannot could not stand with him. I think that if I meet such a man I will have no idea, maybe I will say so sorry for you but I really need to get off the bus and...say goodbye to him as soon as I can, haha.
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