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This is my diary about spending time in a school.
3rd Oct 2016It was on Monday today. Today is Monday. We had an assembly in the morning. I had on to teach a class after than, which I thought I was prepared for the lesson. , but did not manage the class clearly wasn't because I didn't carefully check carefully my lesson plan. There are wrong letters (プリント? ノート?) I brought the wrong lecture notes, so I didn't teach the lesson with confidence.
In the afternoon, my co-worker in the afternoon asked me to go to see the lake with (him/her). We go there I agreed to go. The weather was supposed to be nice, but the wind was blowing hard. strongly blew up from the lake. The weather was supposed to be nice.
There is no electricity or water, so I have to make a fire on my own. I live a hard life. I am starting to get hungry.
3rd Oct 2016
Today is Monday. We had an assembly in the morning. I had to teach a class after, which I thought I was prepared for, but clearly wasn't because I didn't carefully check my lesson plan. I brought the wrong lecture notes, so I didn't teach the lesson with confidence.
In the afternoon, my co-worker asked me to go see the lake with (him/her). I agreed to go. The weather was supposed to be nice, but the wind was blowing hard.
There is no electricity or water, so I have to make a fire on my own. I live a hard life. I am starting to get hungry.
This is my diary about spending (time?) in a school
3rd Oct 2016Today is Monday. We had our assembly in the morning. I had class (test/exam?) after that, I thought I had prepared for the lesson well enough, but I did not manage to clear it (class or test?) because I didn't check my lesson plan carefully enough. There were wrong letters in my preparation. I did not speak with confidence.
In the afternoon my co-worker asked me to go to lake with him/her. We went there. There were strong winds coming up from the lake. The weather was supposed to be nice.
There is no electricity and water. I have to make a fire on my own. I live a hard life. I am getting hungry.
This is my diary about spending in a school
3rd Oct 2016It was on Monday today.Today was Monday. We had the assembly in the morning. I had on a class after than that, I thought I prepared for the lesson. I did not manage the class. Because I did not check carefully carefully check my lesson plan. There are wrong letters in my preparation. I did not speak it with confidence.
My co-worker in the afternoon In the afternoon, my co-worker asked me to go to see the lake. We go there. The wind strongly blew up from the lake. The weather was supposed to be nice.
There was no electricity and or water. I have to make a fire on my own. I live a hard life. I am getting hungry.
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