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I am not fluent in English but I know quite a bit of grammar due to a test I did recently.
Staying Fit
Staying fit is one of most fashionable things nowadays. Everybody wants to be healthy and in shape.To achieve both, staying fit and being healthy, anybody anyone can do a wide range of exercises. It is true that it depends on your availability. It means, how much time you have to practice sports or do exercises.
For instance, a busy student surely can only go to a gym in the evening or at the night. Although In this case, the best option is doing exercise at home or going to run freelance(?) go jogging.
In this day and age (which days and age are you saying?) Nowadays, eating healthy food is absolutely affordable, since this sort of diets are based on vegetables, chicken, tunny, potatoes, rice and eggs, and their prices are normally low in any supermarket.
Apart from what was mentioned above, to be strict at the time of eating, it means, not eating any other food out of this range. Another recommendation is to eat five or six times a/per day. It’s very important due to because it helps the body to accelerate the metabolism so, that it can burn much more calories.
I highly recommended this lifestyle. There are no drawbacks.
Obs: Although join two sentences: Although busy students can only go to the gym in the evening, they can also do exercises at home or go jogging.
However break in two: Busy students can only go to the gym in the evening. However, they can also do exercises at home or go jogging.
Due to: must be used to show cause not result and must be followed by a pronoun, ing verb or noun. e.g. the metabalism of a person accelerates due to the quantity of food he or she eats. = "result" due to "reason". or
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Staying Fit
Staying fit is one of most fashionable things nowadays. Everybody wants to be healthy.To achieve both, staying fit and being healthy, anybody can do a wide range of exercises. It is true that it depends on your availability. It means, how time can you get to practice sport or do exercise.
For instance, a busy student surely only can go to gym in the evening or at the night. Although, the best option in this case is doing exercise at home or going to running on your own freelance.
In this day and age, eating healthy food is absolutely affordable, since these sorts of diets are based on vegetables, chicken, tuna, potatoes, rice and eggs, and their prices are normally low in any supermarket.
Apart from what I mentioned above, you need to be strict at the time of eating. It means, do not eat any other food out of this range. Another recommendation is eating in five or six times during the day. It’s very important due to help the body to accelerate the metabolism so that it can burn much more calories.
I highly recommended this lifestyle. There are no drawbacks.
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