A trip to an ecological park
Today,I took a trip to an ecological park in another city nearby.It is a pity that most flowers there don't blossom during this period of a year.The scenery is still attractive,though.
During the trip,I took a lot of pictures.Thanks to the pixels of my mobile,the pictures I took are very clear.I can even see the splash clearly.
After a day of trip,I feel a little footsore now.But I did enjoy myself very much.
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A trip to an ecological park
Today, I took a trip to an ecological park in another city nearby. It is a pity that most flowers there don't blossom during this period of a the year. The scenery is still attractive, though. Remember to type a space after commas and periods!During the trip, I took a lot of pictures.Thanks to the pixels pixel count of on my mobile, the pictures I took are very clear.I can even see the splash clearly.
After a day of trip vacation/walking, I feel a little footsore now. But I did enjoy myself very much. I don't know why we don't say "a day of trip", but we don't!
Thank you for your corrections!!!
Your English is great--only very minor mistakes!
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A trip to an ecological park
Today, I took a trip to an ecological park in another city nearby. It is a pity that most flowers there don't blossom during this period ofDuring the trip, I took a lot of pictures. Thanks to the pixels of my mobile, the pictures I took are very clear. I can even see the splash clearly.
After a day of trip, I feel a little footsore now. But I did enjoy myself very much.
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