My birthday
My birthday is on 26 of August. In this year on my birthday, my wife organized a surprise for me. In the morning one of my friends rode over to me. He and my wife said we are going to for out of town, but firstly we need to be gone to the one place. We came to the quay and had started to wait for something. I didn't understand what happening. After the time, other my friends came to us. We stayed on the quay and spoken. It was strange, but nobody told me what it is the meaning. After 5-10 minutes we saw the sailing. It was the sailing for us and we were sailing on the Volga during 3 hours. It was an amazing! It was very windy. It was the friendly environment. It was my best birthday.
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My birthday
My birthday is on the 26th of August. This year for my birthday, my wife organized a surprise for me. In the morning, one of my friends came over to see me. He and my wife said, "We are going out of town, but first we need to stop somewhere else." We came to the quay and had started to waited for something. I didn't understand what was happening. After a time, my other friends came to us. We stayed on the quay and talked. It was strange, but nobody told me what was happening. After 5 or 10 minutes we saw the sailboat. It was the sailing for us and we were sailing on the Volga for 3 hours. It was an amazing! It was very windy, but the conditions were still good. It was my best birthday.Замечательно! Хорошая работа. It sounds like you had a lot of fun.
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My birthday
My birthday is on the 26th of August. This year for In this year on my birthday, my wife organized a surprise for me. In the morning, one of my friends drove over to my house. rode over to me. He and my wife said we are were going to for out of town, but firstly that we needed to be gone to the one place go somewhere. We came went to the quay and began to had started to wait for something. I didn't understand what was happening. After the some time, other friends came out to us. We stayed on the quay and talked. It was strange, but nobody told me what it is the meaning of anything. After 5-10 minutes, we began to see the sails. It was The sails were intended for us and we were went sailing on the Volga during for 3 hours. It was an amazing! It was very windy. It was a friendly environment. It was my best birthday ever.Nice writing! Just a few minor corrections! -Kayla :)
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My birthday
My birthday is on the 26th of August. In This year on my birthday, my wife organized a surprise for me. In the morning, one of my friends rode over (this implies he was on horseback, I would say "drove over" if in a car or "came over" if on foot) to me. He and my wife said we are going to for out of town, but first we need to go to a one place. We came to the quay and had started to wait for something. I didn't understand what was happening. After some time, some of my other friends came too to us. We stayed on the quay and talked. It was strange, but nobody told me the meaning of it. After 5-10 minutes we saw the sailboats (sails), or "After 5-10 minutes we went sailing.".We went sailing and we were sailing on the Volga for 3 hours. It was an amazing! It was very windy. It was a friendly environment. It was my best birthday yet.Sounds fun!
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