Writting about a character in a story Hello, could you read my text and give me some comments about grammar, structure or connections ? I write my feeling about Daenerys in Game of Thrones. Thanks ! Daenerys is one of two last descendants of the first king. The king was killed at the end of the war, there were only two children of his blood survived and they were taken to a far island. Daenerys was then grown up with her big brother, who is the king to her, and she is princess. Their lives is a run from land to land to escape the hunt since lots of people want their dead. However, Daenerys is always a girl with responsiveness, she listens to her brother, the king to her, and accept every demands of him. He asks her to marry a strange leader, who can give him an armies in exchange. When she gets away from her brother, she shows more and more her thinking. To be the wife of the leader, she can command and even she commands her king. She follows what she should do, because she wants to protect her king. I find on her the government of a king, a good king. She has people around her because they love her, not because they are commanded to do.