What about Facebook and social networks?
It is a fact that the way of comunicating has changed dramatically nowadays. We dont need to buy stamps or envelopes. Only switching on our movile phone we receive messages, whatsapss or pictures, and we feel loved and comfortable for the resto f the day.
As for facebook. People are not aware of the dangers that they are suffering sharing private information. Not only people enjoy showing pictures in lingery or in a pregnancy state, but also they share telephone numbers, addresses or bank account figures. As a result identity theft, caber bullying and so on have raised.
To finísh off I’d like to point out that it’s about time to recover our face to face contact and avoid spending a lot of using social networks.
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What about Facebook and social networks?
It is a fact that the way we communicate has changed drastically. We don't need to buy stamps or envelopes anymore. Only by switching on our mobile phone we receive messages, whatsapp or pictures, and we feel loved and comfortable for the rest of the day.Take The Facebook as an example. People are not aware of the dangers that they might suffer sharing private information. Not only people enjoy showing pictures of themselves in lingerie or pregnant in a pregnancy state, but they also share telephone numbers, addresses or bank account figures(?). As a result they become easy targets to identity thefts, cyber criminals, and so on have raised.
To finísh off (It sounds a little strange finishing or concluding an statement, text or essay with "to finish off" I would prefer to use words such as to conclude, to sum up, furthermore etc...) I’d like to point out that it’s about time to get back to our face to face contact and avoid spending a lot time of using social networks.
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What about Facebook and social networks?
It is a fact that the way of communication has changed dramatically nowadays. We don't need to buy stamps or envelopes. Only by switching on our mobile phone we receive messages, whatsapp or pictures, and we feel loved and comfortable for the rest of the day.As for Facebook: People are not aware of the dangers that they are suffering by sharing of private information. Not only do people enjoy showing pictures of themselves in lingerie or in a pregnancy state, but they also share telephone numbers, addresses or bank account numbers. As a result of identity theft, cyber bullying and so on have increased.
To finish off I’d like to point out that it’s about time to get back to our face to face contact and avoid spending a lot of time using social networks.
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