這是我第一次的用中文寫的作文

我從來沒有寫用中文说或者說話中文写过东西。所以在italki的筆記本功能上初次試寫中文是一個好主意。祝希望我寫了的作文淺白显易懂！

差錯太多，所以預先不好意思。


My first time writing in Mandarin.

I have never written or spoken in Mandarin. That's why I think that writing an entry in Mandarin for the first time with italki's notebook function would be a good idea. I hope my text is easy to understand.

I'm sorry in advance for the many mistakes.

這是我第一次的用中文寫的作文

我從來沒有寫或者說話過中文。所以在italki的筆記本功能上初次試寫中文是一個好主意。祝希望我寫了的作文淺白淺顯易懂！

差錯太多，所以預先說聲不好意思。


My first time writing in Mandarin.

I have never written or spoken in Mandarin. That's why I think that writing an entry in Mandarin for the first time with italki's notebook function would be a good idea. I hope my text is easy to understand.

I'm sorry in advance for the many mistakes.

這是我第一次的用中文寫的作文

我從來沒有寫或者說話中文。所以在italki的筆記本功能上初次試寫中文是一個好主意。祝我寫了作文淺白【用“简明”比较合适。“浅白”是指陈述一个道理和思想，或者其他比较复杂的事情，讲得很好懂。】易懂！

差錯太多，所以預先不好意思。【“差错”有discrepancy的意思，所以用在这里不合适。】


My first time writing in Mandarin.

I have never written or spoken in Mandarin. That's why I think that writing an entry in Mandarin for the first time with italki's notebook function would be a good idea. I hope my text is easy to understand.

I'm sorry in advance for the many mistakes【mistake = 错误】.

這是我第一次的用中文寫的作文

我從來沒有寫或者說过中文。所以在italki的筆記本功能上初次試寫中文是一個好主意。祝我寫了作文浅显易懂！

错误太多，所以提前说不好意思。 

表达的基本意思到位了，也没那么多错误，well written!


My first time writing in Mandarin.

I have never written or spoken in Mandarin. That's why I think that writing an entry in Mandarin for the first time with italki's notebook function would be a good idea. I hope my text is easy to understand.

I'm sorry in advance for the many mistakes.

這是我第一次用中文寫的作文

我從來沒有寫或是說過中文。所以我覺得在italki的筆記本功能上初次試寫中文是一個好主意。希望我寫的作文能淺白易懂！

寫錯太多，所以先說不好意思。


My first time writing in Mandarin.

I have never written or spoken in Mandarin. That's why I think that writing an entry in Mandarin for the first time with italki's notebook function would be a good idea. I hope my text is easy to understand.

I'm sorry in advance for the many mistakes.

It's good enough for me to understand the meaning. ^^