First work day
Hi, yesterday was my first working day and I'm very happy because I think it's a good opportunity for my career path and the best thing is that it's close to my house. In my last job my commute was 1 hour more or less but now my commute is only 15 min. That's amazing that's why I feel fantastic. My first day was very lucky because some directors from other countries visiting us and they invited to have lunch in a fancy restaurant and after that we went bowling. To resume I didn't work in my first working day :)
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First work day
Hi. Yesterday was my first day at work and I'm very happy because I think it's a good opportunity for my career path and the best thing is that it's close to my house. At my last job my commute was 1 hour more or less but now my commute is only 15 min. That's amazing and that's why I feel fantastic. My first day I was very lucky because some directors [ I'm not sure director is the right word here. I think managers might be closer to what you're looking for] from other countries were visiting us and they invited us to have lunch at a fancy restaurant and after that we went bowling. To resume [ I also don't think this is the right word to use. I think " in conclusion or " to sum it up" might work best ] I didn't work in my first working day :)I can tell you've worked hard at your english! There are very few real grammatical errors and it's mainly just nit picking on syntactical stuff. Awesome job Gerardo! Sounds like work went great for you :)
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