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Personal statement to apply in a University I have a keen interest in technology and I am always involved with computers and other related technologies. As such, I would like to study Computer Engineering. I find great pleasure in developing new things and would very much like to expand my skills further at university. For my work placement I worked with GIS (Geographic Information System) and databases. This has improved my SQL skills and my logical thinking. I am a very curious person, so in my free time I really like to teach myself new things. My other hobbies include playing videogames, working out and watching movies. I am looking forward to studying and learning new programming languages and other incredible things at university. I am very optimistic about my future at university.

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Personal statement to apply at a university

I have a keen interest in technology and I am always involved with computers and other related technologies. As such, I would like to study computer engineering. (If "Computer Engineering" is the specific name of the class/course, then keep it capitalized) I find great pleasure in developing new things and would very much like to expand my skills further at the university. (You will already know what university you're applying by the time you send this personal statement, right?)

For my work placement I worked with GIS (Geographic Information System) and databases. This has improved my SQL skills and my logical thinking. (The reason why I crossed out 'my' is because you can tell you're talking about how you think logically without saying 'my')

I am a very curious person, so in my free time I really like to teach myself new things. (Saying "teach myself" isn't improper, but you could say "learn" instead)My other hobbies include playing video games, working out(,) and watching movies.

I am looking forward to studying and learning new programming, languages(,) and other incredible things at the university. I am very optimistic about my future at the university. (You don't have to, but you should say "there" or "here" instead of "at the university." Saying "at the university" twice in two consecutive sentences is a little redundant.)

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