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Are these sentence correct? Who is a good friend? In my idea, a good friend is the one who pays a lot of attention to you, I mean to a good friend you won’t have to say you are sad or happy but have to say why you are so. Because when you have a really good friend, they can find you are not ok and have something to say by just looking at you or listening to you on the phone. A good friend is a real wealth in your life. As it 出乎我的想法,一个好朋友很关注你, 这样你不应该告诉他们你高兴还是悲伤因为他们就发现它看看你还是给你打你电话。你只应该为什么你这样觉得。在你的生活一个好朋友是一个真钱财。按照名言说:一个好朋友是赛一房家属。这个名言非常行,你必需快帮助的时候,一个好友能帮你胜似一房家属。他们知道你还多,你一般要很多事情。另外,你自己选你的朋友所以你最喜欢他们但是你的家人和家属你没选。

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Are these sentence correct?

Who is a good friend?

In my idea, a good friend is the one who pays a lot of attention to you, I mean to a good friend you won’t have to(have to 这个词组的中文翻译是“不必”,而不是“不应”) say you are sad or happy but have to say why you are so. Because when you have a really good friend, they can find you are not ok and have something to say by just looking at you or listening to you on the phone. A good friend is a real wealth in your life. As it



出乎我的想法,一个好朋友很关注你, 这样你不应该告诉他们你高兴还是悲伤因为他们就发现它看看你还是给你打你电话。你只应该为什么你这样觉得。在你的生活一个好朋友是一个真钱财。按照名言说:一个好朋友是赛一房家属。这个名言非常行,你必需快帮助的时候,一个好友能帮你胜似一房家属。他们知道你还多,你一般要很多事情。另外,你自己选你的朋友所以你最喜欢他们但是你的家人和家属你没选。
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Are these sentence correct?

Who is a good friend?

In my idea, a good friend is the one who pays a lot of attention to you, I mean to a good friend you won’t have to say you are sad or happy but have to say why you are so. Because when you have a really good friend, they can find you are not ok and have something to say by just looking at you or listening to you on the phone. A good friend is a real wealth in your life. As it 



在我看来,一个好朋友就是时刻关注着你的朋友, 我是指你不用亲口告诉他们你是悲伤还是高兴而是告诉他们你为什么会这样的好朋友。因为当你有一个真正的好朋友时,他们通过看着你或是从电话里就会发现你不是很好。一个好朋友是你生活中一笔真正的财富。

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