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3. Could you correct my English. Hi, How is your day going? I heard that Australia has Racial discrimination and It's harsh especially asian. So I haven't thinking to visit there. I'm going to watch Breaking bad! I think It's interesting because I searched Priority of recommended American shows and Breaking bad is third! I'm an accountant at IT firm for 2years. Are you student or worker? I have indigestion now so I have headacheㅠㅠ I totally pigged out yesterday. haha

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3. Could you correct my English?

Hi, how is your day going?

I heard that there is much racial discrimination in Australia and it is especially harsh towards Asians. 

So I haven't thought (or maybe wanted) to visit there.

I'm going to watch Breaking Bad! I think it will be interesting because I searched a ranking of recommended American shows and Breaking bad is third!  (If you have already watched it and think it is interesting, then it's is correct. If you have not yet watched it  but think it will be interesting then you should use will be) 


I'm an accountant at IT firm and have worked there for 2  years. Are you student or worker?

I have indigestion now so I have a headacheㅠㅠ

I totally pigged out yesterday. haha


~I hope this helps!


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3. Could you correct my English.

Hi, How is your day going?

I heard that Australia has racial discrimination and it's harsh, especially for asian people.

So I haven't thought about visiting there.

I'm going to watch Breaking bad! I think It's interesting because I searched the  priority of recommended American shows and Breaking bad is third!

I'm an accountant at an IT firm for 2years. Are you student or worker?

I have indigestion now, so I have a headacheㅠㅠ

I totally pigged out yesterday. haha
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Not sure what kind of TV you like but Breaking Bad is a very unpleasant tv show. It is about a high school teacher who becomes a Meth Drug Lord. Not a very encouraging subject. ;) You might want to watch something else.
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Hi, how is your day going? I heard that there is a racial discrimination against Asians in Australia. I don't think I will visit Australia. I'm going to watch Breaking Bad. I searched for recommended American shows and Breaking Bad is 3rd! I am an accountant ant an ITfirm. I've worked there for two years. Are you a student or a worker? I really over ate yesterday and now I have a headache and an upset stomach.

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