I am restarting writing again. I had much time without doing it. Is this ok? ( I think it is)
5 days before you left me, I heard "What a wonderful world" by Louis Amstrong. I hopeless sang the song on a vehicle with no emotion, almost whispering it to myself, thinking about how frightening the world could be when you are not here
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5 days before you left me, I heard "What a wonderful world" by Louis Armstrong. I hopelessly sang the song on a vehicle with no emotion, almost whispering it to myself, thinking about how frightening the world could be when you are not here.
It might be slightly better to structure the last sentence like so:
Thinking about how frightening the world can be when you are not here.
or.
Thinking about how frightening the world seems when you are not here.
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God, the lyrics!, I didn't expect this mesagge..thank you...
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I see trees of green red roses too
我看见绿树和红玫瑰
I see them bloom for me and you
我看见他们为你我开放
And I think to myself what a wonderful world
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If you speak spanish: When you're not here = cuando no estés aquí (subjunctive)?
on or in a vehicle?
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