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Could you correct my letter? Dear Alice! I didn’t write for so long because I’d like to surprise you. I believe it’s nice to surprise someone who lives so many kilometres from me. I kept your address in my mind because I wanted to send you something in the future when you weren’t expecting it haha. So… Here it is. Pity, you didn't decide to surprise me first. I hope my handwriting isn’t so bad; some people say I write like a monkey with a pen haha. I'm writing to tell you about how I’ve been recently and to get to know about you! I’d like to get to know new information about you also. Please, tell me everything what happens there recently. I became more keen on website developing recently and I try to make one website to looking for snail mail penpals! I’m too weak in website programming yet but I already have this ambitious project. I’m still a beginner in this hobby but I think I’d like to work with websites as a freelancer or for an agency in the future.

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Could you correct my letter?

Dear Alice!

I didn’t write for so long because I’d like to surprise you. I believe it’s nice to surprise someone who lives so many kilometres from me. I kept your address in my mind because I wanted to send you something in the future when you weren’t expecting it haha. So… Here it is. Pity (don't use this word... try something else like "Shameful", you didn't decide to surprise me first. I hope my handwriting isn’t so bad; some people say I write like a monkey with a pen haha.

I'm writing to tell you about how I’ve been recently and to get to catch up! Please, tell me everything that has happened there recently.

I became more keen on website developing recently and I try to make one website to looking for snail mail penpals! I’m too weak in website programming however, I already have this ambitious project. I’m still a beginner in this hobby but I think I’d like to work with websites as a freelancer or for an agency in the future.
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Could you correct my letter?

Dear Alice!

I didn’t write for so long because I’d like I wanted to surprise you. I believe it’s nice to surprise someone who lives so many kilometres away from me. I kept your address in my mind because I wanted to send you something in the future when you weren’t expecting it haha. So… Here it is. It's a pity, you didn't decide to surprise me first. I hope my handwriting isn’t so bad; some people say I write like a monkey with a pen haha.

I'm writing to tell you about how I’ve been recently been and to get to know about you! I’d like to get to know new information about you also. Please, tell me everything what happens there recently.

I became have become more keen on website developing recently and I try to make one website to looking for snail mail penpals! I’m too weak amateur in website programming yet but I already have this ambitious project in mind. I’m still a beginner in this hobby but I think I’d like to work with websites as a freelancer or for an agency in the future.
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I think this letter might be a bit long, but it should be like that haha. Looking forward to hearing from you. Stay well, yours Dawid!
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I can see you’re interested in photography! If you print photos, could you send to me a few pictures from your city in your letter? In my opinion it’s very cool when we can do snail mail with physical things, not just send everything via the Internet. It’s really old-school! As I write about physical things… Could you send me one the smallest unit of Hungarian money? I think I can collect money from the whole world. Of course, just small units. No one will send to me big units hah. Would you like to receive something from Poland? Summer holidays are coming! We have to work for a few weeks yet and we’ll be free for for a few weeks. To be honest, we can say I have holidays for the whole time teehee. I have to do some projects for a university and I’ll be able to feel free. Is it your final year? Did you already choose your university? Do you already know what you’ll do during the holidays? I think that I’ll try do my best to be fluent in English and develop my programming skills. I hope to learn German and Russian too! Hmm I can tell you some things about my university. I think a few things will be funny haha! Look, for instance I have one teacher who is very polite etc. We have basic information technology with him. He sometimes behaves like Snape. He comes behind to you without a sound. When you think ‘Oh yeah, he already went to his desk… I can watch some Internet then!’ and as you launch an Internet browser he asks you ‘Any problems?’ and you have goose bumps hahaha! I have also an old fart who often read beginning of a word in English and rest half finish in Polish, lol. Crazy man, he doesn’t drink Coca-Cola but he does Pepsi. Did you already become a volunteer? What’s it like? How do you help people? Could you tell me about it? Did you began learning any new language? Now, I don’t have too many time to do it but I try to develop my English and learn new languages in the summer holidays.
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I began my internship about one month ago. Every student has to finish it if he wants to be engineer. I went to three computer shops with services etc. but they were tiny shops and the bosses didn’t want to accept me there. I went to another shop as well and my boss is a cool man who immediately decided to employ me. It’s pity that it’s work for free haha but to be honest, no one makes me sit there. I was trying to make website with WordPress system. You know, it’s a system using to create a wide variety of websites. You don’t have to write code from the basics but you can just ‘click-click’, say Abracadabra and you already have a nice-looking website! You can download any themes or plug-ins to Wordpress. I’d like to exchange snail mail with someone who can write long letters. I always receive short messages from people who don’t know what to write about in letters. I thought… ‘Let’s write to Alice! Maybe she’ll answer me!’. How much snail mail items does your collection already have? I have just two letters and four postcards. I’ve received two postcards from Russia recently. I just asked to exchange postcards with two random foreign girls from there. I asked first girl to write to me in Russian but unfortunately Daria forgot and wrote in Russian. I had to ask one more Russian for the same thing. When I opened my mailbox recently, I saw a colourful envelope and I thought it was a letter but it had this postcard. Cool, she handmade an envelope! The second girl also sent me a postcard which I received two or three days after the first one. It’s written with perfect cursive and black pen. It’s finally in Russian and it looks vintage. It’s probably my best postcard at the moment. A bit old-school!

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