Oline Rumors
Internet has become part of our life, people use computer everywhere, such as they keep in touch with their friends and family, they also use computer to do their work. There is no doubt that computer facilitate our life. But the problem also comes, as there is no clear and powerful laws to limite the act, some people attack others by the rude words. We also can read the rumors on the Internet, like the end of the world is coming. Such rumors bring negative sides to the society. As there is no rules can punish the person who spred the rumors, more and more people use the Internet to do the immoral acts. The celebrities are the main victims. In order to catch more people’s attention, some websites spread the untrue information about the celebrities, which annoys these public figures. Online rumors need to be limited.
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Blue=sounds better=听起来更好
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Oline Rumors
The Internet has become part of our life. People use computers everywhere, such as they keep in touch with their friends and family, they also use computer to do their work. for everything, including work and keeping in touch with friends and family. There is no doubt that computers facilitate improve our life lives. But the problem also comes, as there is no clear and powerful laws to limite the act, some people attack others by the rude words. But they also cause problems, since there are no clear laws to prevent personal attacks and verbal assaults. We also can read the rumors on the Internet, like the idea that the end of the world is coming. Such rumors bring out the negative sides to the society. As there is are no rules that can punish the person who spread the rumors, more and more people use the Internet to do the immoral acts. The Celebrities are the main victims. In order to catch more people’s attention, some websites spread the untrue information about the celebrities, which annoys these public figures. Online rumors need to be limited.Want to progress faster?
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