Second hand shops
Today, I went to a second hand shop to sell my stuffs. I sold CDs, DVDs and comics I owned. I had to pay electricity bill until 29th september. In this month, I ate out with my friends a lot because there were lots of things to celebrate. That's why, I didn't have enough money. I got some money by selling my stuffs. Now I'm sad to lose them, but I relieved not to worry about electricity bill any more. From now on, I will be careful about money!
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Second hand shops
Today, I went to a second hand shop to sell my stuffs. I sold CDs, DVDs and comics I owned. I have until the to pay electricity bill until 29th of September to pay the electricity bill. In This month, I have eaten ate out with my friends a lot because there were are lots of things to celebrate. That's why I didn't don't have enough money. I got some money by selling my stuffs. Now I'm sad to lose them, but I'm relieved that I don't have to not to worry about the electricity bill anymore. From now on, I will be careful about with money!
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Second hand shops
Today I went to a second hand shop to sell my stuff. I sold CDs, DVDs and comics I owned. I had until 29 September to pay the electricity bill. This month, I ate out with my friends a lot because there were lots of things to celebrate. That's why I didn't have enough money. I got some money by selling my stuff. Now I'm sad to lose them, but I am relieved not to worry about the electricity bill any more. From now on, I will be careful about money!Very well written!
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