Wronged

Yesterday evening I checked my son's homework.
Very untidy handwriting! I advised him that he should clean away the eraser rubbings after using the eraser but he often does not care to.
I asked him to rewrite in a new notebook. He felt wronged and cried and was very sad. I didn't comfort him but continued to cook dinner. He was crying while writing.
When supper was ready I checked again. It was perfect this time. I told him: If you're serious about your writing, your writing will treat you well. He looked at what he rewrote with a sweet smile.

Very well written!

wronged

Yesterday evening I checked my son's homework.
Very untidy handwritten! I advised him that should be clean down.  I tell him to Use the eraser while writing wrong, but he often care it .
I asked him to rewrite on a new notebook but he felt wronged and cried very sadly, I didn't comfort him but continued to cook dinner. He was crying while writing.
When supper was ready ,I checked again. It was perfect this time. I told him "If you're serious of your writing,your writing will treat you well.He looked at what he rewrote and then with a sweet smile.

Wronged

Yesterday evening, I checked my son's homework.
Very untidy handwriting! I've advised him that he should clean down up when using the eraser while writing wrong incorrectly, but he often don't doesn't care it .
I asked him to rewrite on in a new notebook, he felt he wronged made errors and cried very sad badly. I didn't comfort him but continued to cook dinner, he just  cried while writing.
When supper was ready, I checked again, it was perfect this time. I told him, " If you're serious of your writing, your writing will treat you well". He looked at what he rewrote and then with made a sweet smile.

Overall, you did an excellent job. Your communication was 100% clear. However, you need to work on your spacing after punctuation marks. If you have an specific question on any of the corrections I made, feel free to send me a message. Keep up the good work, feichang hao.