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My dream house I always dream with one house very big. My dream house would have three plants and one garden very big. On the first one I would have the kitchen and a big living room. If I have a car I would have one garage. On the second plant I would have three rooms. One for my and the other rooms for my sons. In my room I would have one beedroom very big, and one TV. I would also have one toilet with one big path. On the third plant I would have one room with bookshelves, one TV, one computer and one laboratory. In the garden I would have one cottage and one grill.

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My dream house

I always dream with one house very big. My dream house would have three plants and one garden very big.
On the first one I would have the kitchen and a big living room. If I have a car I would have one garage.
On the second plant I would have three rooms. One for my and the other rooms for my sons.
In my room I would have one beedroom very big, and one TV. I would also have one toilet with one big path.
On the third plant I would have one room with bookshelves, one TV, one computer and one laboratory.
In the garden I would have one cottage and one grill.

MY CORRECTION IS BELOW:

I always dream of one very big house.  My dream house would have three parts (not, plants) and one very big garden.  In the first one, I would have the kitchen and a big living room.  In the second part, I would have three rooms.  One for myself, and the other rooms for my sons.  In my room I would have one very big bedroom with one TV.  I would also have one toilet with one big bath (not path).    On the third part, I would have one room with bookshelves, one TV, one computer and one laboratory.  If I have a car I would have one garage.  In the garden I would have one cottage and one grill.  

MY COMMENTS:

*** I moved your sentence about having a garage to the end of the description.  It is better when making a list, as you have done with your three parts of your house, to write descriptions about these specific parts, and then include other important details following these descriptions.  Notice that I included it towards the end, along with your description of your garden.  This makes it easier for the reader to understand.  

I also highlighted words that were misused.  

I was not sure if when you mentioned a big bath, if you were referring to a bath tub, as in a place to bathe?  If you were referring to a room that would have a toilet, then the room itself would either be called a bathroom, or lavatory.  

I was unsure where you described your third part, you mentioned wanting a laboratory.  I did not understand if you meant a laboratory to do science projects, or a lavatory (with a toilet).  The two words look and sound very close, but have two very different meanings.


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My dream house

I always dream with one house a very big one . My dream house would have three plants and very big garden  .
On the first one I would have the kitchen and a big living room. If I have a car I would have it in the  garage.
On the second plant I would have three rooms. One for my and the other rooms for my sons.
In my room I would have a very big  beedroom , and one TV. I would also have one toilet with one big path.
On the third plant I would have one room with bookshelves, one TV, one computer and one laboratory.
In the garden I would have one cottage and one grill.

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