Diary:006
This is my diary entry 006!
If you have a free moment, could you correct my diary for me? Thank you so much!
What was the most expensive thing that you bought today?
→I just bought some snacks and rice ball in a convinience store. However I booked a hair salon and an eyelash salon, so I'll pay a lot of money this week. I usually spend my money for my beauty.
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Diary:006
This is my diary entry 006!If you have a free moment, could you correct my diary for me? Thank you so much!
What was the most expensive thing that you bought today?
→I just bought some snacks and a rice ball at a convenience store. However I booked salon appointment for my hair and eyelashes, so I'll pay a lot of money this week. I usually spend my money on my beauty.
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Notes:
- When you mention one thing (rice ball, convenience store), you want to add the article before it (a/an/the). Only in plural form you don't add the article.
- When you're speaking about a location: I am in a convenience store - in = inside. However, when you buy something from there you use *at* or *from*. Also, when you spend, you usually spend *on* something. Here is an explanation how prepositions work: http://www.talkenglish.com/grammar/prepositions-on-at-in.aspx
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Diary:006
This is my diary entry 006!If you have a free moment, could you correct my diary for me? Thank you so much!
What was the most expensive thing that you bought today?
→I just bought some snacks and a rice ball in a convinience convenience store. However I booked treatments at a hair salon and an eyelash salon, so I'll pay a lot of money this week. I usually spend my money for on my beauty.
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Your English is well developed. The only significant issue was in the noun that you booked; you can't book a hair salon (that's a building or a store), but you can book a treatment at a salon. (Another way of saying it would be that you "made appointments" at the salon.)
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