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The way to stop environmental deterioration Nowadays, the environment where people live has changed greatly due to various human activities. It is obvious that our life are easier than the counterpart in the past time. However, with the those countless high-technique stuffs and diverse modern buildings emerging in our life, we are suffering numerous threats posed by environmental deterioration, such inhaling PM 2.5, less potable water and so on. It is high time to take some measures to keep environmental deterioration under control. In my perspective, I hold the point that we can plant trees and build city parks to help relieve the pollution created by urbanization, followed by three reasons. Firstly, plant trees can make a great different for relieving the environmental pressure. As we all know, at present, trees in mounting number have been cut down owing to human activities, which is one of factors that cause the global warming. If we plant trees and create more parks in the city, carbon dioxide produced by industry, cars or something else can be deceased for green material will absorb some of it. What is more, trees can increase the quality of air in the way releasing oxygen, which is good for our health as we can inhale more clear and fresh air. At the same time, more trees or green stuffs can maintain nutrition into the soil, and restrain earth turn into sand. Secondly, creating parks can encourage citizen to pay attention to our environment and thus they will protect nature positively. In the modern society, we hardly have chances to get access to nature, sometimes we might forget that the Earth is not only our home. But we actually can not control nature. If we create more parks in the city, people will play and relax in the parks. they can take a break from daily routine, forget some annoyance. What else, there are also animals in parks. Those fabulous sceneries and lovely animals can arouse love to nature deeply from people’s heart, which make citizen more concern our environment and keep the behavior that harm environment at bay. In a word, Although reducing plastic bags and using more public transportation do have good affection, disadvantages outnumber advantages. So I advocate that people are suppose to plant more and create parks. To do so not only can protect environment but also can beauty our local community, which kill two birds with one stone.

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