Hmm. just thoughts!
Today was a pretty strange good day, I woke up and I realized that everything was something good, something bad. The lights turn on and the dark shut down, there was something in the sky, something beautiful like the sound of the ocean but I couldn't see it, i could just feel it.
The day was passing and the hours were slower and slower, the time frozen and the thoughts starting to whisper the feelings locked in a cage that rarely appears, the afternoon shine on and the dark lit, the darkness embrace the place and the feelings dissapear..
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Hmm. just thoughts!
Today was a pretty strange but good day, I woke up and I realized that everything had both good and bad to it. was something good, something bad. The lights turn on and the dark is gone shut down, there was something in the sky, something beautiful like the sound of the ocean, but I couldn't see it, I could just feel it.The day was passing and the hours became slower and slower, the time frozen and the thoughts starting to whisper the feelings locked in a cage that rarely appears, the afternoon shine on and the dark lit(not sure what this means), the darkness embraces the place and the feelings disappear..
I hope this is helpful. It is very poetic, which can be difficult to correct.
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Better stop to use these kind of substances (Just kidding! I liked your text)
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