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I am learning English... Hello everyone, My name is Marcos, I am from Argentina and I am writing to share my profile information. First of all, I will start talking about my background. I have studied in EET1 a technical school, the main subject of this school is informatics. Then I studied electronic engineering in UNLAM (Universidad Nacional de la Matanza). Today I am working in electronic design of an important brand. The second point I would like to talk is about why Ii am learning English. In my career, the English is very important, because the electronic engineering use a lot of technical documents and e-mail. What is more, in the next mouth, I want to apply in a new job which demand more level of English. The last topic I will talk is about something about myself. I like share time with my family, I will be father in December, and I am very anxious about that. In my free time I like play football or share time with friends. Thanks for read my resume, if you found something to improve, please let me know. Best regards, Marcos

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I am learning English...

Hello everyone,
My name is Marcos, I am from Argentina and I am writing to share my profile information.

First of all, I will start by talking about my background. I have studied in EET1 a technical school ( I used to study in a technical school called EET1.) The main subject of this school is informatics (~ information science). Then I studied electronic engineering in UNLAM (Universidad Nacional de la Matanza). Today I am working in the industry of electronic design of in / for an important brand.

The second point Second, I would like to talk about why I am learning English. In my career, the English is very important, because the electronic engineering use a lot of technical documents and e-mail ( don't quite get it, sorry ). What is more, in the next mouth  next month I am going to want to apply in a new job which demands more level its applicants a much higher ability in English.

The last topic  Finally I  will talk is about want to talk something about myself. I like share spending time with my family, I will be a father in December, and I am very anxious about that. In my free time I like playing football or  share spending time with friends.



Thanks for reading my resume  sharing, if you found something to improve, please let me know.

Best regards,
Marcos


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Congratulation !! You must be excited being a father!
Keep it up! : )


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I am learning English...

Hello everyone,
My name is Marcos. I am from Argentina and I am writing to share my profile information.

First of all, I will start talking about my background. I have studied in EET1 a technical school, the main subject of this school is informatics. Then I studied electronic engineering in UNLAM (Universidad Nacional de la Matanza). Today I am working on the electronic design of an important brand.

The second point I would like to talk about is why I am learning English. In my career, English is very important, because electronic engineering uses a lot of technical documents and e-mails. What is more, next month I want to apply for a new job which demands a higher level of English.

The last topic I will talk is about is something about myself. I like to share time with my family. I will be a father in December and I am very anxious about that. In my free time I like to play football or share time with friends.

Thanks for reading my resume. If you found something to improve, please let me know.

Best regards,
Marcos

Very well written!

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I am learning English...

Hello everyone,
My name is Marcos, I am from Argentina and I am writing to share my profile information.

First of all, I will start talking about my background. I have studied in at EET1, a technical school, the main subject of this school is informatics. Then I studied Eelectronics Eengineering in at UNLAM (Universidad Nacional de la Matanza). Today I am working in Eelectronics Ddesign of for an important brand.

The second point I would like to talk is about is why Ii am learning English. In For my career, the English is very important (Perhaps better to say, Firstly, learning English is very important for my career), because the electronics engineering uses a lot of technical documents and e-mails. What is more, in the next mouth month, I want to apply in for a new job which demands more a higher level of English.

The last topic I wil want to talk is about is to tell you something about myself. I like share spending time with my family, I will become a father in December, and I am very anxious about that this. In my free time I like to play football or share spend time with friends.

Thanks for reading my resume, if you've found something I need to improve, please let me know.

Best regards,
Marcos

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