Diary:005
This is my diary entry 005!
If you have a free moment, could you correct my diary for me? Thank you so much!
What is your favorite sport?
→My favorite sport is swimming. When I was a kid, started to swim because I wanted to cure asthma.However, I became to like swimming gradually and practiced for ten years. Finally I was a fourth swimmer in my prefecture!
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Diary:005
This is my diary entry 005!If you have a free moment, could you correct my diary for me? Thank you so much!
What is your favorite sport?
→My favorite sport is swimming. When I was a kid, I started to swim because I wanted to cure my asthma. However, I came to like swimming gradually and practiced for ten years. Finally I became the fourth best swimmer in my prefecture!
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Diary:005
This is my diary entry 005!If you have a free moment, could you correct my diary for me? Thank you so much!
What is your favourite sport?
→My favourite sport is swimming. When I was a kid, I started to swim because I wanted to cure my asthma. However, I gradually came to like swimming and practiced for ten years. Finally I was the fourth fastest swimmer in my prefecture!
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