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The first diary I am very glad to meet italki. Due to I have joined in one overseas-invested enterprise at last month ,and they are always sent Emial to me in English ,so I have to impove my English writing as soon as possible. Luckly ,I find many guys same to me who have same goal to improve foreign languages in italki Tomorrow is Saturday . I can go to bed later and then summary my job of today . Today I am so happy , beacuse is Friday and will have a weekend .Besides, everybody have a piece of cake in the exchange meeting . Luckly , My cake have many strawberry that I like it very much. In my work, I need to review many requiments in document from vendor , but the terrible is the document need to be reviewed and amended again and again . It's too complex to update it for me. OK. It's time to go to bed now. I wish someone can kindly provide some comments on my first diary . Thanks and wish everybody have a good weekend!

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The first diary

I am very glad to join italki.
Because I joined an overseas-investment enterprise last month and they are always sending me email in English, I must improve my English writing as soon as possible. Luckily, I found many guys in the same as me who have same goal to improve their foreign languages in italki
Tomorrow is Saturday . I can go to bed later and then summarise the job I did today. Today I am so happy because it is Friday and the weekend . Besides, everybody has a piece of cake in the exchange meeting . Luckly , my cake has many strawberries that I like very much.
In my work, I need to review many requirements in documents from vendors , but the trouble is that the documents need to be reviewed and amended again and again . It's too complex to update it for me.

OK. It's time to go to bed now. I wish someone would kindly provide some comments on my first diary .
Thanks and wishes that everybody has a good weekend!

Very well written!

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