Can anyone help me to revise?
However, if you were a young man in my country, you'd better own a car. It is a prerequisite to marriage, otherwise the young girl's mother won't agree her daugher to get married with you. Pathetic!
Would anyone help me to find the mistikes in the above sentences? How should I revise to make them more elegant?
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Can anyone help me to revise?
However, if you were a young man in my country, you'd better own a car. It is a prerequisite to marriage, otherwise the young girl's mother won't agree with her daughter to getting married with to you. Pathetic!Would anyone help me to find the mistiakes in the above sentences? How should I revise to make them more elegant?
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