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College student (graduating in 2 degrees) with 3 work experience year I'm humble, honest, I really want to work. I'm able to study and work at the same time, because I love learning and doing things. I´m responsible and tidy. I like to be healthy, I practice a lot of sports, I like meeting people and new cultures. I'm sociable and fun, but above all, I work hard. I have always worked client-facing, since I was young I like teamwork. Always I´ve been playing in some different teams (basketball, soccer...) and always I´ve been team Capitan, also, I´ve been Chief coach some years, because of this, passion for teamwork grew on me. Nowadays, I´m finishing my Degree in Business Management and I´m in ¾ years on Degree in Nutrition and Food Science. I now that are really different, but also, I really enjoy the Nutrition. I´ve able to be working and studying at the same time the last years.

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College student (graduating with 2 degrees) with 3 years of work experience

I'm humble, honest, and I really want to work. I'm able to study and work at the same time, because I love learning and doing things. I´m responsible and tidy.

I like to be healthy, I play lots of sports, I like meeting people and discovering new cultures. I'm sociable and fun, but above all, I work hard.

I have always worked directly with clients, since I was young.  I like teamwork/ I like being part of a team. I continue to play in different sports leagues  in some different teams (basketball, soccer...) and always I´ve been the team Capitan, also, I´ve been head coach some years, and because of this,  passion for teamwork has grown on me.

Nowadays Right now/ At the current time (mas formal), I´m finishing my Degree in Business Management and I´m three quarters finished with my Degree in Nutrition and Food Science. I now that are really different, but also, I really enjoy the Nutrition.

I´ve been able to continue working and studying at the same time the last few  years.

 Como ves, la mayoria de los cambios son sugerencias. En EEUU, no diriamos "I am humble" al applicarse para un puesto. Veo esto en muchos escritos aqui y por  aqui en Italki  nunca lo ves en EEUU.   En cambio, describe las cosas que has hecho para mostrar que puedes ser una parte de un equipo, y que no se trata de ti todo el tiempo. Si puedes trabajar como una parte de un equipo de manera contundente, va a decirle a tu jefe que "eres humilde" sin intentar asegurar una superioridad moral.

 

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