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Writing. Long ago, people kept in touch each other by sending letters, as the time passes, people could be able to make calls, this was possible thanks to an awesome invention, the phone, at the beggining was very heavy and ugly but very useful for the people. Nowadays, the cellphone is the most important invention because it's very slender, practical, pretty and it works as well as a computer. The most use the cellphone for everything. On the other hand, the cellphone has changed the people's everyday life as much as people doesn't care about taking long walks at the park with their families anymore. Now, they prefer to chat and surf on the internet every time.

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Writing.

Long ago, people kept in touch with each other by sending letters, but as the time passed, people could be were  able to make calls. This was possible thanks to an awesome invention, the phone. In the beginning, it was very heavy and ugly but very useful. for the people. Nowadays, the cellphone is the most important invention because it's very slender, practical, pretty, and it works as well as a computer. The most Most people use their cellphone for everything. On the other hand, the cellphone has changed the people's everyday life as much as given that people doesn't don't ("people" es plural en ingles) care about taking long walks at the park with their families anymore. Now, they prefer to chat and surf on the internet every time.


Buen trabajo!

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Thanks so much for your corrections! :) So do I! :(
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I miss the old days :/
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Writing.

Long ago, people kept in touch each other by sending letters, as the time passes, people could be able to make calls, this was possible thanks to an awesome invention -- the phone. At the beginning it was very heavy and ugly but very useful for the people. Nowadays, the cellphone is the most important invention because it's very slender, practical, pretty and it works the same as a computer.

The most use the cellphone for everything.Cellphone can be used for almost everything.  On the other hand, the cellphone has changed the way of people's everyday life / (people's lifestyle) as much as people doesn't care about taking long walks at the park with their families anymore. Now, they prefer to chat and surf on the internet every time.



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