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Life in technology The advent of new era has tremendously innovated our world. Technology is a token of new era as it has been an essential part of human life .Convenience and comfort living condition, varieties of recreation, and innumerable changes has been explored due to exertion of technology, also shifted human thought. Nevertheless, people acquire less happiness than they did in the past. Modern human counts on technology to color their lives such as using mobile phone to talk, laptop to think and install a robot help us with clean, cook and tackle most of the housework. People take utilize those newly invented gadgets for granted regardless of hazardous those could generate for us. A great deal of detrimental influence has been exerted upon communication with our friends by utilizing mobile phone too much time. We somehow feel frustrated and lonely even though hundreds of names are displayed in phone screen. That is because it is unlikely to expose true emotional only if we sit around and talk from heart to each other without disguise. Only acquire mutual respect, can we consort sincere friends, whom could cheer us up. Addicting to electronics diminished outdoor time we spend with friends and family. Those outdoor activities such as having a natural excursion, playing basketball or barbecue, these can not only interacted with other people to remove the barrier for communication, also wind down our minds and find out beauties as in this world well.

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