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Writing requirements please refer to pictures I uploaded. Dear Zoe, Hope you are doing well! I'm glad to hear from you and I suggest you to get a job as well.Peraonally I agree with working expersence is more important than college degree. If you get a work then you would learn more practial skills. Practial skilla are very helpful for your work and life, especially commuicate with others, work together with others, accept others and to be accepted. In your e-mail you told me you are not interested in learning. It's very difficult for you to go to a great university. Besides feeling boring abot the school life. Which i think is college really not suits you. Why don't you choice a work what you do best. Such as a driver, you are good at driving. Driving skilled and obey the traffic laws, regulation have no record of recent years. You need to challenge yourself. Best regards,

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Writing requirements please refer to pictures I uploaded.

Dear Zoe,

Hope you are doing well!

I'm glad to hear from you and I suggest you to get a job as well. Personally I agree that working experience is more important than a college degree. If you get a job then you would learn more practical skills. Practical skills are very helpful for your work and life, especially communication, teamwork, accept others and to be accepted.

In your e-mail you told me you are not interested in studying. It's very difficult for you to go to a great university. Besides, school life is boring. That is why I think college really does not suit you.

Why don't you choose a job that you do best. Such as a driver, you are good at driving. You have great riving skills and you obey the traffic laws and regulations. You have no record in recent years. You need to challenge yourself.

Best regards,

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