The old houses above ours Head.
The old houses above ours Head.
If you have thought about old actions that you do you should, look for forget this bad things.
The effect and horrible about our body and soul. Also the thoughtful always attracts effect towards to soul . For example stress and depressed.. these feeling go beyond make bad for us it’s doesn’t to lead goes on for some place. I’ve been read many articles that say about this. And at moment I’m finding the new ways for open my mind. I do Yoga, run every day. And I love this.
Think about this.... Good luck and my advice for you is that should find your way for win about this feelings.
Take care.
Thanks a million.
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The old houses above ours Head.
The old houses above ours Head.our head. [[Your meaning here is obscure.]]If you have thought about old actions that you do did [[alternative: "have done"]],* you should, look for try to forget this** the bad things.
Their effect*** and is horrible about on our body and soul. Also the thoughtful always attracts effect towards to soul**** . For example stress and depressed depression. these These feelings go beyond make making things bad for us. it’s doesn’t to lead goes on for some place. ***** I’ve been reading many articles that say talk about this. And at moment I’m finding the new ways for to open my mind. I do Yoga and run every day. And I love this. ******
Think about this.... Good luck and my advice for you is that you should find your own way for win about this to overcome such feelings.
Take care.
Thanks a million.
* I sounds more natural to say "If you have thought about things you have done in the past."
** The word "this" is singular but "bad things" is plural. So "this" is wrong, but "these" or "those" would be grammatically correct. Not all actions from the past are bad, so I thought you were just recommending that one forget some (but not all) actions of the past: i.e., the bad ones.
*** There is ambiguity whether you are referring to the bad things of the past or to thinking about those bad things. Probably better her to change "Their effect" to "The effect of dwelling upon bad things that happened in the past ..."
**** Sorry, but I cannot discern your meaning in this sentence.
***** I can't understand what you were trying to say in the clause that I crossed out. Maybe something like "They don't lead to any useful place." But the logic is backwards. Rather than say "not only are they bad, they are not even useful," it would be more logical to say "not only aren't they useful, they are actually bad for us."
****** Using "this" (singular) here is problematical, because it refers back to two things (plural): running and doing yoga. Maybe say something like "I love this new routine."
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