WHY!?
It's very helpful that someone tells me my entry has some grammatical errors.
But without pointing out exactly which part is wrong and how it's wrong and just leave is pointless. How am I supposed to correct my english like that?
Sorry for the rant.
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WHY!?
It's very helpful when someone tells me my notebook entry has some
grammatical errors.But without describing exactly which part is wrong and how it's wrong. It
just leaves it pointless. How am I supposed to correct my English like
that?
Sorry for the rant.
bye
Hopefully I can
restore some of your faith! See my comments above as I can't write every necessary within the character limit.
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When
‘when’ should be here as it indicates that a condition is being stated. The condition is what makes the statement before the ‘when’ correct. For example;
- I eat food when I am hungry.
- I go to the beach when the sun is out.
The statement and condition can also be revered:
- When I am hungry, I eat food.
- When the sun is out, I go to the beach.
‘when’ should be here as it indicates that a condition is being stated. The condition is what makes the statement before the ‘when’ correct. For example;
- I eat food when I am hungry.
- I go to the beach when the sun is out.
The statement and condition can also be revered:
- When I am hungry, I eat food.
- When the sun is out, I go to the beach.
'when’ can also be used to answer questions that require a conditional answer.
- Ami: Do you play games?
- Tomo: When I am bored.
- Ami: Do you play games?
- Tomo: When I am bored.
notebook entry
It is good to be specific about what type of ‘entry’ you mean the first time you introduce a new item into a discussion. You can then use ‘entry’ on its own for the rest of the paragraph as the reader will assume its still in regards to the notebook.
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describing
‘putting out’ is not the best choice here. As you are stating that you desire a ‘description’ then you should use its adjective form, ‘describing’
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It just leaves it pointless
Try not to use more than one conjunction (such as ‘and’) in a single sentence. It is for this reason that I separated this short statement from your previous statement. I assume that ‘is’ as opposed to ‘it’ was a typing mistake.
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Whenever you write the name of a language or nationality, you always capitalise
It is good to be specific about what type of ‘entry’ you mean the first time you introduce a new item into a discussion. You can then use ‘entry’ on its own for the rest of the paragraph as the reader will assume its still in regards to the notebook.
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describing
‘putting out’ is not the best choice here. As you are stating that you desire a ‘description’ then you should use its adjective form, ‘describing’
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It just leaves it pointless
Try not to use more than one conjunction (such as ‘and’) in a single sentence. It is for this reason that I separated this short statement from your previous statement. I assume that ‘is’ as opposed to ‘it’ was a typing mistake.
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English
Whenever you write the name of a language or nationality, you always capitalise
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