Is my email correct?
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Can you please check if the text of my email is correct?
"Hi Matthew,
thank you for getting in touch with me.
I am definitedly free on Monday at 7.30 pm or on Tuesday at 8 pm.
Every lesson is 15 e/h. The first lesson is free and I’m not too fussy when it comes to the length of it, so we will have time to discuss your goals, assess your level and more important to get to know each other.
Warm wishes,
Michela"
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Is my email correct?
Hello everybody!Can you please check if the text of my email is correct?
"Hi Matthew,
Thank you for getting in touch with me.
I am definitely free on Monday at 7.30 pm or on Tuesday at 8 pm.
(I would only use "definitely" in this way if he has already contacted you specifically about times of 7:30 and 8pm, and you are just confirming those times. If you are suggesting times that have not already been mentioned, "I will be free on Monday at......" would be better. Other than that, there was just a couple of minor punctuation I changed to make your meaning clearer in the last paragraph)
Every lesson is 15 e/h. The first lesson is free and I’m not too fussy when it comes to the length of it, so we will have time to discuss your goals, assess your level, and -- more importantly -- to get to know each other.
Warm wishes,
Michela"
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Thank you for getting in touch with me.
I am definitely free on Monday at 7.30 pm or on Tuesday at 8 pm.
Every lesson is 15 e/h. The first lesson is free and I’m not too fussy when it comes to the length of it, so we will have time to discuss your goals, assess your level and most importantly to get to know each other.
Warm wishes,
Michela"
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