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IELTS writing about convenience food Many people today frequently consume convenience food because of the fast pace of life and irregular working hours. It has a trend to replace the traditional food. In my opinion, traditional food is an inalienable part of our culture, and we should not let this change happen. Convenience food like its name implies, is usually convenient to prepare which presents a huge advantage in this fast-moving modern society. It saves us a lot of time, so we can put more energy to our work and gain competitive edges. In addition, we do not have to be good cook to prepare our meals. For example, we just need to put a frozen pizza, which is available in every supermarket, into a microwave or an oven, after 15 minutes, a delicious pizza can be served on table. But here comes the problem: convenience food can affect people’s ways of life, including eating habits. Traditional means of food preparation are known for the diversity of ingredients, cooking styles and flavors, and many traditional foods show the evolution of cuisine in different regions. The cooking of traditional food includes a number of factors, such as color, aroma and taste, and most importantly, nutrition. Although traditional foods will take a longer time to prepare, it is healthier and tastes better than convenience foods. In addition, traditional food has an positive affect on family relationship. In general, the process of food preparation provides family members with an opportunity to communicate with each other and improve cooperation with family members. And the delicious dishes also can attract them to eat at home. This is a smart way people can contribute a lot to family members’ health. Convenience food started out to meet the demands of those who cannot afford time to cook traditional food. Now, it is a part of our lives. On the other hand, traditional food has its irreplaceable advantages. Overall, the co-existence of the two kinds of foods will make our life more colorful.

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IELTS writing about convenience food

Many people today frequently consume convenience processed food because their of fast-paced lives and irregular working hours. It has This a trend to that often replaces the traditional food. However, in my opinion, traditional food is an inalienable  important part of our culture and we should not let this change happen.

Convenience Processed food like its name implies is usually convenient to prepare, which presents a huge advantage in this fast-paced, modern society. It saves us a lot of time, so we can put more energy to towards our work and gain an competitive edges. In addition, we do not have to be good cooks to prepare our meals. For example, we just need to put a frozen pizza, which is available in every supermarket, into a microwave or an oven.  After 15 minutes, a delicious pizza can be served on the table.

But here comes the problem:  Unfortunately, convenience processed food can affect our people’s ways of life, including especially our eating habits. Traditional means of food preparation are known for the diversity of ingredients, cooking styles and flavors.  Many traditional foods show the evolution of cuisine in different regions. The cooking of traditional food includes a number of factors, such as color, aroma, taste, and most importantly, nutrition. Although traditional foods will take a longer time to prepare, it is healthier and tastes better than convenience  processed foods.

In addition, traditional food has an positive affect on family relationships. In general, the process of food preparation provides family members with an opportunity to communicate with each other and improve cooperation. with family members And   Also, the delicious meals can attract  encourage them to eat at home. This is a smart way people can contribute a lot to their family members’ health.

Convenience Processed food started out as an attempt to meet the demands of those who could not cannot afford time to cook traditional food. Now, it is a part of our lives. On the other hand, traditional food has its irreplaceable substantial advantages. Overall, the co-existence of the two kinds of foods both will make our lives more colorful.

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IELTS writing about convenience food

Many people today frequently consume convenience food because of the fast pace of life and irregular working hours. It is replacing traditional food. In my opinion, traditional food is an inalienable part of our culture, and we should not let this change happen.

Convenience food, as its name implies, is usually convenient to prepare which presents a huge advantage in this fast-moving modern society. It saves us a lot of time, so we can put more energy into our work and gain *a* competitive edge. In addition, we do not have to be *a* good cook to prepare our meals. For example, we just need to put a frozen pizza, which is available in every supermarket, into a microwave or an oven, *and* after 15 minutes, a delicious pizza can be served on *the* table.

But here comes the problem: convenience food can affect people’s ways of life, including eating habits. Traditional means of food preparation are known for the diversity of ingredients, cooking styles and flavors, and many traditional foods show the evolution of cuisine in different regions. The cooking of traditional food includes a number of factors, such as color, aroma and taste, and most importantly, nutrition. Although traditional foods will take a longer time to prepare, it is healthier and tastes better than convenience foods.

In addition, traditional food has an positive affect on family relationships. In general, the process of food preparation provides family members with an opportunity to communicate with each other and improve cooperation with family members. And the delicious dishes also can attract them to eat at home. This is a smart way people can contribute a lot to family members’ health.

Convenience food started out to meet the demands of those who cannot afford time to cook traditional food. Now, it is a part of our lives. On the other hand, traditional food has its irreplaceable advantages. Overall, the co-existence of the two kinds of foods will make our life more colorful.
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