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When you are feeling down... Everyone around me always says "Do you have dilemma?" I am trying to think everything positive. So when my favorite skirt get stuck in the door and torn apart, I consider it's time to get new cloths! Or when I fail at somethings I regard that I need to change the former way of studying. I always try to chin up even if I'm in a bad condition. But I am a human. I am sometimes feeling down. I think feeling down isn't such a bad thing. When you want to cry, it's ok to cry out. Everything hasn't been worked well these days. I've been frustrated so I took out this feeling on my boyfriend yesterday. I didn't mean to take out on him. I regretted what I was saying to him. Ha was nothing to do with my condition. But I realized I have one that I can take out my feelings. When I'm in trouble, I tried to solve and deal with problems by myself. So I found out I am blessed with having him. After all I am positive girl! What I want to say is that it's waiting for you that are not only in bad condition but you can find positive things that you didn't realized in your daily life!

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When you are feeling down...

Everyone around me always says "Do you have a dilemma?" ("is something wrong? or "is there a problem?" would sound more natural). I try to think about everything positively. So when my favorite skirt get stuck in the door and torn apart, I consider it time to get new clothes! Or when I fail at something, I realize that I need to change my way of studying. (or "change the way I study")
I always try to keep my chin up even if I'm in a bad condition. But I am a human. I sometimes feel down. I think feeling down isn't such a bad thing. When you want to cry, it's ok to cry it out.
Everything hasn't been working well these days. I've been frustrated, so I took out this feeling on my boyfriend yesterday. I didn't mean to take it out on him. I regretted what I was saying to him. He had nothing to do with my condition. But I realized I had someone that I could take out my feelings on. (or "on whom I can take out my feelings" is technically the correct grammar) When I'm in trouble, I try to solve and deal with problems by myself. So I realized I am blessed to have him. After all I am a positive girl! What I want to say is that it's waiting for you that are not only in bad condition (this part doesn't make sense to me, I'm not sure what you mean) you can find positive things that you didn't notice before in your daily life!



Great entry! You write very well :) And it's great to have a positive attitude!

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