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The alternation between solitude and sociability All people are naturally sociable, that's a general truth. making a relationship with others, it's easy, but keeping and evaluating these relationships without a bad influence in my personality or my principals, that the hardest thing. There's a scientific term in Sociology named 'herd effect" like you don't listen to rock music, but when you sit with a group fascinated by this kind of music you automatically add it to your taste. So a time of solitude to clear your mind and remembering who you're it's indispensable nevertheless to keep contact with others, it has the same importance to keep knowing your world.

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The alternation between solitude and sociability

All people are naturally sociable, and that's a general truth. It is easy to make relationships with others, but it is hard to keep and evaluate these relationships without a bad influence from your personality or your principles.
There's a sociological term named 'herd effect." For example, you don't usually listen to rock music, but when you sit with a group of people who are fascinated by this kind of music, you automatically add it to your taste.
Therefore, it is indispensable to have some time of solitude to clear your mind and to remember who you are although you keep contact with others. It has the same importance to keep knowing your world.


This is a very interesting article! It has a good flow of the contents, and it was very easy to understand what you say. You have a clear idea about the balance between time with others and time by yourself, and it was described well.

I think it will be better to add a general definition of the sociological term before you mention the example. The other mistakes are very small ones.

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