My future dream I'm 20years old. I have a lot of dream. For example, I want to go to many country, I want to be a community manager, I want to make a shop and I want to get a marry with nice husband..

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My future dream I'm 20years old. I have a lot of dream. For example, I want to go to many country, I want to be a community manager, I want to make a shop and I want to get a marry with nice husband...etc. haha The dreams are too many to decide that one of the best my dream. I don't know what to do in my future. What should i do ? What would you do if you were me? Should I try everything? I need your advice. And Would you please correct the following sentences?

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My future dreams

I'm 20years old.
I have a lot of dreams.
For example, I want to go to many countries , I want to be a community manager, I want to buy a shop and I want to marry a nice husband...etc. haha
The dreams are too many to decide which one is my best dream.
I don't know what to do in my future.
What should i do ?

What would you do if you were me?
Should I try everything?

I need your advice.

And

Would you please correct the following sentences?

That's all i know :P

My future dream

I'm 20years old.
I have a lot of dreams.
For example, I want to go to many countries, I want to be a community manager, I want to make a shop? start my own business and I want to get a married to a nice husband...etc. haha
The dreams are too many to decide which one is my best dream.
I don't know what to do in the future.
What should i do ?

What would you do if you were me?
Should I try everything?

I need your advice.

And

Would you please correct the following sentences?

My future dream

I'm 20years old.
I have a lot of dreams.
For example, I want to go to many countries, I want to be a community manager, I want to make a shop and I want to get married with a nice husband...etc. haha
The dreams are too many to decide the best of my dreams.
I don't know what to do in my future.
What should i do ?

What would you do if you were me?
Should I try everything?

I need your advice.

And

Would you please correct the following sentences?

My future dream

I'm 20 years old.
I have a lot of dreams.
For example: I want to go to many countries; I want to be a community manager; I want to open a shop and I want to get a marry with nice husband married to a nice man (You cant marry a "husband" as that word means he is already married)...etc. haha

The dreams are too many to decide that one of the best my dream. I have too many dreams to be able to decide which is best. (This sentence structure is simpler and easier to understand)
I don't know what to do in my future.
What should i do ?

What would you do if you were me?
Should I try everything?

I need your advice.

And

Would you please correct the following sentences?

My future dream

I'm 20years old.
I have a lot of dreams.
For example, I want to go to many country countries, I want to be a community manager, I want to make open (when you talk about starting your own shop) a shop and I want to get a marry get married with a nice husband...etc. haha.
The My dreams are too many to decide that one of the best my dream. To decide which dream is the best.
I don't know what to do in my future.
What should I do ?

What would you do if you were me?
Should I try everything?

I need your advice.

And

Would you please correct the following sentences?

As what would I do, opening your own shop is a great option in order to follow your other dreams! You could visit other countries with your gains and even advertise it online being your own community manager!

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