Success Dear classmates, It's a pleasure for me to have a chance to make a speech today! What is success? Many people wil ask.Nowadays these seems to a consensus in society that wealth is the symbol

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Shirley Yang

Success Dear classmates, It's a pleasure for me to have a chance to make a speech today! What is success? Many people wil ask.Nowadays these seems to a consensus in society that wealth is the symbol of the success.as far as my knowledge in concerned,Success is over i want to live,you want a lot of money does not necessarily mean,how famous. How can we succeed?What kind of quality should we have for success?It's a truth universally acknowledge that most of succeed people in possession of a positive attitude.I believe in the saying ''All sunshine with shade,all pleasure without pain is not life at all.we all have troubles,worries and challeges in our life and we should deal with them wisely.for example,MaYun,you know,a very successful businessman,when he failed in college entrace examination,start all over again,didn't give up.this is a kind of positive attitude he finally succeed.Being optimistic means confidence,which is good for us to achieve our goals.........

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Success

Dear classmates, It's my pleasure to have the chance to make this speech today!
What is success? Many people may ask.Nowadays it seems to be a consensus in society that wealth is the symbol of the success.as far as I am concerned , success is over i want to live,you want a lot of money does not necessarily mean,how famous.(I don't understand this sentence)
How can we succeed?What kind of quality should we have for success?It's a truth universally acknowledged that most of those successful people are in possession of a positive attitude.I believe in the saying ''that All sunshine with shade,all pleasure without pain is not life at all.we all have troubles,worries and challenges in our lives and we should deal with them wisely.for example,MaYun,as you know, is a very successful businessman,when he failed in college entrance examination,he started all over again,he never gave up.this is a kind of positive attitude, he finally succeed.Being optimistic means being confident,which is good for us to achieve our goals.........

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Success

Dear classmates, it is a pleasure for me to have the chance to make a speech speak today!
What is success? Many people will ask. Nowadays, wealth seems to be a consensus in society of a symbol of success. As far as my knowledge is concerned, success is over how I want to live, the fact that you want to have a lot of money does not necessarily mean, how successful you will be (how famous???).
How can we succeed? What kind of quality should we have for success? It's a truth universally acknowledged that most of the successful people are in possession of a positive attitude. I believe in the saying ''All sunshine with shade, all pleasure without pain is not life at all". We all have troubles, worries and challenges in our life and we should deal with them wisely. For example, MaYun, you know, a very successful businessman, when he failed the college entrance examination, he started all over again, he didn't give up. This is the kind of positive attitude for he to finally succeed. Being optimistic means confidence, which is good for us to achieve our goals.........

Not sure in some parts. I hope the correction is useful

it's depend on you. if first you failed, never stop. try try again :) at the end you'll find success :D

many people ask..

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