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Formal letter Writing This are the instructions for the writing, its for the First Certificate exam, so if you can tell me if it is high enough to pass the exam, i would be so grateful! Thank you :) (ACTIVITY CO-ORDINATOR WANTED! (Weekends only) Would you like to work with young children aged 6-12? Do you have lots of energy? Are you an excellent swimmer? If so, then we want to hear from you. Our children’s club needs someone responsible to look after a group of 10 children to teach them swimming and other activities.) Dear Sir or Madam, I have seen your advertisement for the vacancy of an activity co-ordinator in the local newspaper. I am writting because I would like to apply for the job. I am 20 years old and I am currently studying a degree in Psichology which I think it could be useful to understand the feelings and needs of the childrens. I am also an experienced swimmer because I started to swim when I was only 4 years old. The last two years I have been coaching a local team of summer activities for young children, and I am very keen playing other sport games like tennis or football. I am free to work at weekends, have plenty of time and energy and feel I would be suitable for this vacancy. I enclose a recent photo with my C.V. and am available for an interview wherever you want. Please do not hesitate to contact me if you require any further information. I look forward to hearing from you as soon as possible. Yours sincerely, Judith Arias.

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Dear Sir or Madam,

I have seen your advertisement for the vacancy of an activity co-ordinator in the local newspaper. I am writing because I would like to apply for the job.

I am 20 years old and I am currently studying a degree in Psychology which I think it could be useful to understand the feelings and needs of the childrens. I am also an experienced swimmer because I started to swim when I was only 4 years old.

The last two years I have been coaching a local team of summer activities for young children, and I am very keen on playing other sports games like tennis or football.

I am free to  from work at weekends .So  I have plenty of time and energy. I think it  would be suitable for this vacancy. I enclose a recent photo with my C.V. and I would be available for an interview wherever you want. Please do not hesitate to contact me if you require any further information.

I look forward to hearing from you as soon as possible.

Yours sincerely,
Judith Arias.

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