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New Friend taday,i am very glad to meet a friend from Canada, i think that the exchange will be very difficult, but she can speak chinese a little so i no longer worry about the exchange difficult.she wants learn chinesse very want . first we became friends with each other on skype.but i cat't use skype, beacuse is my first time use skype.it is not easy to use QQ. unfortunately, the problem may be the time difference, we did not speak a few words.my first say is "HI! morning."but then i realized that i was wrong. then i changed to say "晚安"then she answered me"are you going to bed already?". i say is you not me .

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New Friend

taday,i am very glad to meet a friend from Canada, i think that the exchange will be very difficult, but she can speak chinese a little
so i no longer worry about the exchange difficult.she wants learn chinesse very want .
first we became friends with each other on skype.but i cat't use skype, beacuse is my first time use skype.it is not easy to use QQ.
unfortunately, the problem may be the time difference, we did not speak a few words.my first say is "HI! morning."but then i realized that i was wrong. then i changed to say "晚安"then she answered me"are you going to bed already?". i say is you not me .


A few general corrections: 

Pay attention to punctuation. You should never put a space before a period. You should always put a space before a new sentence. 

Pay attention to capitalization. You should always capitalize proper nouns like languages, countries, names - for example, "Chinese." You should also capitalize the first word of each sentence. 

Also there are several spelling errors (e.g. taday should be today, chinesse should be Chinese). Maybe try to remember these important, common words and maybe consider running your writings through a spell checker, if you have access to something like that on your computer/app/program.


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taday,i am very glad to meet a friend from Canada, i think that the communication will be very difficult, but she can speak some chinese so i no longer worry about the exchange difficult.she wants learn chinesse very much .
first we became friends with each other on skype.but i cat't use skype, beacuse is my first time use skype.it is not easy to use QQ.
unfortunately, the problem may be the time difference, we did not speak a few words.my first say is "HI! morning."but then i realized that i was wrong. then i changed to say "晚安"then she answered me"are you going to bed already?". i say is you not me .

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