a tired little girl i just came back from my part-time job ,teaching a child and helping her get through a examination . she was just come back from a writing class when she met me ,tired and unhappy.

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a tired little girl i just came back from my part-time job ,teaching a child and helping her get through a examination . she was just come back from a writing class when she met me ,tired and unhappy. her three-day-holiday was full of varieties of classes ,such as writing,math,english and drawing, not only face to face but also online. after i finished my teaching content, i found she haven't had super yet .and it was 8pm. i feel sorry for her. not only her ,all of the students at her age have the same situation. they are too tired and stressful.

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A tired little girl

I just came back from my part-time job, teaching a child and helping her get through an examination .
She was just coming back from a writing class when she met me, tired and unhappy. Her three-day-holiday was full of varieties of classes, such as writing, math, english and drawing, not only face to face but also online. After I finished my teaching content, I found she hadn't had supper yet. And it was 8pm. I felt sorry for her. Not only her, all of the students at her age have the same situation. They are too tired and stressful.

Almost perfect! 'was full of varieties of classes, such as...' - This is a fine sentence and people would understand you fine. However, 'was full of a variety of classes, such as...' sounds slightly more natural.

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