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Toefl Essay A foreign visitor has only one day to spend in your country. Where should this visitor go on that day? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your choice. The country where I live is called Israel. It is in the middle east, considered as the second largest city after Jerusalem, which is the capital city, and with population of eight millions residents. It has lot of attractions, historical sites, museums, and important companies and government offices. If I were a foreign visitor with limited time, I would definitely choose Tel aviv because of the following reasons First of all, Tel aviv has a plenty of things to suggest for the typical tourist. Let’s start with shopping. It is a candy shop for tourists who are looking for purchase great stuff. It has huge centers, from great malls to streets full of worldwide famous shops. Move on to the culture. Tel aviv built an amazing and interesting museums that has attracted the community since forever. For instance, the science museum that has incredible exhibitions. As a local, I have been there twice, and it never feel enough to explore it again and again. Another tourist’s interest is the coast. Israel is located in the israeli coastal plain. As a result Tel aviv enjoys from satisfied amount of beaches where tourists can enjoy the hot and warm whether as well as the high temperature water of the mediterranean sea. Moreover, Tel aviv suggests unstoppable nightlife. Many youngers are hanging out in fancy pubs and bars every day in the week. When your are getting tired - easily reserve a room in the best hotels in the country. From suites with coast view, to great pools and spa services. I would definitely recommend to all of you ,who are having troubles deciding the next vacation, take the first flight from your favourite airline company and come to enjoy the big city.

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Toefl Essay

A foreign visitor has only one day to spend in your country. Where should this visitor go on that day? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your choice.

The country where I live is called Israel, the city is Tel-Aviv. It is in the middle east, considered as the second largest city after Jerusalem, which is the capital city, and with population of eight millions residents.
It has lot of attractions, historical sites, museums, and important companies and government offices. If I were a foreign visitor with limited time, I would definitely choose Tel aviv because of the following reasons

First of all, Tel aviv has a plenty of things to suggest for the typical tourist.
Let’s start with shopping. It is a candy shop for tourists who are looking to purchase great stuff. It has huge centers, from great malls to streets full of worldwide famous shops.
Moving on to the culture. Tel aviv has built amazing and interesting museums that have attracted the community since forever  people for a long time. For instance, the science museum that has incredible exhibitions. As a local, I have been there twice, and it never felt enough, I wanted to explore it again and again.

Another tourist interest is the coast. Israel is located in the israeli coastal plain. As a result Tel aviv enjoys benefits from satisfied amount of (satisfied means more 'bare minimum amount) many beaches where tourists can enjoy the hot and warm weather as well as the high temperature water of the mediterranean sea.

Moreover, Tel aviv suggests unstoppable nightlife. Many youngsters are hanging out in fancy pubs and bars every day in the week.
When your are getting tired - easily reserve a room in the best hotels in the country. From suites with coastal views, to great pools and spa services.

I would definitely recommend to all of you ,who are having troubles deciding the next vacation, take the first flight from your favourite airline company and come to enjoy the big city.
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Really good mate. Tel-Aviv sounds awesome.

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