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My dream car I wish have a ferrary, I know that is a dream but I would like my ferrary could have a leather seats and steering wheel of gold.I enjoy the sun, the ferrary should have a sunroof and silver stick shift a big trunk because I wish to have a lot of suitcases and shine wheels in the bumper a message that says My dream come true.

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My dream car

I wish have a ferrary, I know that is a dream but I would like my ferrary could have a leather seats and steering wheel of gold.I enjoy the sun, the ferrary should have a sunroof and silver stick shift a big trunk because I wish to have a lot of suitcases and shine wheels in the bumper a message that says My dream come true.

I wish to have a Ferrari. I know this is a dream but I would like my Ferarri  to have leather seats and a steering wheel of gold. I enjoy the sun so my Ferarri should have a sunroof. I would also like it to have a silver stick shift and a big trunk because I have a lot of suitcases. It should also have shiny wheels and a bumper sticker that says "My Dream Come True."

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My dream car

I wish I had a Ferrari. I know that is a dream, but I would like my Ferrari to have leather seats and a steering wheel of gold.I enjoy the sun so my  Ferrari should have a sunroof. I would also like a silver stick shift and a big trunk because I want to carry a lot of suitcases. I love shiney wheels and on the bumper I would put a sticker that says My Dream Come True.


Hi Juni,  I hope that you find my suggested changes useful. In English, always capitalize proper nouns like the name of an automobile manufacturer such as Ferrari. You will find that English requires a lot more capitalization than Spanish. I wish you well in your quest for your dream car.  Don't give up hope. I finally got my dream car after 50 years.

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My dream car

I wish have a ferrary, I know that is a dream but I would like my ferrary could have a leather seats and steering wheel of gold.I enjoy the sun, the ferrary should have a sunroof and silver stick shift a big trunk because I wish to have a lot of suitcases and shine wheels in the bumper a message that says My dream come true.

I would write it like this.

I know it is a dream but I would like a Ferrari. With leather seats, a golden steering wheel, and a sunroof because I enjoy the sun. The gear lever would be silver and there would be plenty room in the boot for my array of suitcases. Wheels would sparkle and there would be a sticker at the back saying 'My dream has come true'.


'Stick shift' and 'trunk' are not wrong, they are American English

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