My sweetheart
A few days ago my dear dog left me. Because he has censer
I'm really sorrowful But I believe he want to heaven is happy angel
thank you for your accompany these 15 years
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My sweetheart
A few days ago my dear dog left me. Because he has censer He had a seizure.I'm really sorrowful, bBut I believe he weant to heaven and is a happy angel.
tThank you for your accompany these 15 years.
Your last sentence is ok, however, in the first part of your paragraph, you are talking ABOUT your dog. In your last sentence, you are talking TO your dog. A better last sentence that matches talking ABOUT your dog would be: I would like to thank my dog for accompanying me these last 15 years.
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My sweetheart
A few days ago my dear dog left me (Passed away gives the meaning that he died, beause left may give the meaning that he left willingly) . Because he has had censer CancerI'm really sorrowful But I believe he want went to heaven and is a happy angel
thank you for your accompany these company for the past15 years
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