How important is music in your life?
Music is an art, an art which everybody likes. There are people who sometimes listen some music and another persons who are allways listening music at public transports with his headphones, having a shower or studiying.
Probably music have been invented at the prehistory, it is allways changing its stiles but it is allways in our lifes. On the one hand music is something that help you to feel happy and to express your sentiments. On the other hand it can help people in their therapies and made their more sociable. Another advantage is that music world moves a lot of money and it can be good four music group's or singer's countries. Personally music its very important in my life.
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How important is music in your life?
Music is an art, an art which everybody likes. There are people who sometimes listen to some music and another persons other people who are always listening to music, at public transports with his their headphones, or while having a shower or studying.Probably music have been was invented prehistorically; at the prehistory, it is always changing its styles(or: forms) but it is always in our lives. On the one hand music is something that (can/will) help you to feel happy and to express your sentiments(more common:emotions). On the other hand Also(see note), it can help people in their therapy and made help make their them more sociable. Another advantage is that music world moves a lot of money and it can be good four music group's or singer's countries.(see note 2) Personally music its is very important in my life.
Note 1. The phrase "on the other hand" usually is followed by a contrast to whatever you were talking about. For instance, you state something good, then "on the other hand" state something bad about the same situation.
Note 2. I'm not sure exactly what you mean, but perhaps this will work: Music also can be important as a money maker for both the singer/group, and the countries where they live.
Music is very important to me as well, and I use it to learn Spanish!
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