The Stranger. Part 2. Chapter 13. The wood house. Please, correct my mistakes.
Damien and Lisa arrived at the our world finding theyselves in a grove. It was in the middle of night.They didn't understand where this place was. In a few minutes of walk they found a sightly wooden house. It didn't look abandoned so they should be careful.
"Damien, we need to go in cause of we don't have another way." Lisa said.
"I know. Let's get in."
They began to step noiselessly. The front door wasn't locked so they went inside without any problem. Inside the house looked pleasant however they couldn't see everything in the dark. There were a sofa, a tabble and two chairs about it.
"I'm very tired. I need to sleep. Can you keep watch over here for a little time?" Lisa said.
"Of course"
Damien was tired too couse of the long journey. When Lisa fell asleep Damien sat on the armchair and fell asleep too. Better he hadn't done it...
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Hi Edward. This is an interesting story! Here are a few corrections:
"Damien, we need to go in cause of because we don't have another way." Lisa said.
"I know. Let's get in."
They began to step noiselessly. The front door wasn't locked so they went inside without any problem. Inside, the house looked pleasant; however, they couldn't see everything anything in the dark. There were was a sofa, a tabble and two chairs about it the room.
"I'm very tired. I need to sleep. Can you keep watch over here for a little time while?" Lisa said.
"Of course"
Damien was tired too couse because of the long journey. When Lisa fell asleep, Damien sat on the armchair and fell asleep too. Better he hadn't done it...
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