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Happy Mid autumn Festival Today is chinese's tradition holiday, Mid Autumn festival Everybody go out with familes and friends together to enjoy the full moon at night ,while eating mooncake and fruits . This is my favorite holdiay ever , everybody gathering together and spend time with each other . Tonight ,I spent time with my husband and his coworkers , we had nice real british food ,good beer , so much joy . After dinner ,we played a little pool and darts , I'm so bad at both , hahaha but who cares ! At last ,happy Mid Autumn Festival to everyone .

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Happy Mid autumn Festival

Today is Chinese's traditional holiday, Mid Autumn festival
Everybody go out with familes and friends together to enjoy the full moon at night ,while eating mooncake and fruits .
This is my favorite holdiay ever , everybody is gathering together and spending time with each other .
Tonight ,I spent time with my husband and his coworkers , we had nice real british food ,good beer , so much joy .
After dinner ,we played a little pool and darts , I'm so bad at both , hahaha but who cares !

At last ,happy Mid Autumn Festival to everyone .
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Happy Mid Autumn Festival

Today is a Chinese traditional holiday, the Mid Autumn festival
Everybody goes out with their families and friends together to enjoy the full moon at night, while eating mooncake and fruits .
This is my favorite holiday ever, everybody gathering together and spending time with each other .
Tonight, I spent time with my husband and his coworkers, we had nice, real British food, good beer and so much joy .
After dinner, we played a little pool and darts, I'm so bad at both! hahaha but who cares !

And finally, Happy Mid Autumn Festival to everyone.

Hello Kate, 

It sounds a little bit like an English Christmas, meeting with family and eating special foods.

When you use the name of a country as an adjective it will normally have a capital letter like the country and the people. Remember in English that there is only a space after commas and full stops.


Happy Autumn Festival to you and your family


Bob

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haha ,my bad ,typed it wrongly
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I think you wanted to say holiday, not holdiay, but that was probably just a typo! And happy Mid Autumn Festival to you too!

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