about film
I am a big fan of film.
In the past, I always thought in a good story the most main character must be a charismatic guy who always can make a right decision in the end.
Although this guy isn’t a winner, she or he still have some more important reason make you think this guy is right and integrity.
But recently, i really think I got that wrong.
I think a good movie can make people feel understood, if you don’t wanna appreciate different people and understand different life, why you do this?
Sad is also beautiful, insufficient is also beautiful.
A story may be attractive because of the imperfect.
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About Films
I am a big fan of film.In the past, I always thought that in a good story the protagonist must be a charismatic guy who always makes the right decision in the end.
Although this guy isn’t a winner, she or he will still have some more important reason to make you think they are right or have integrity.
But recently, I really think I got that wrong.
I think a good movie can make people feel understood. If you don’t want to appreciate different people and understand different life, why do you do this?*
Sad is also beautiful and insufficient is also beautiful.
A story may be attractive because of its imperfections.
*I don't understand this sentence.
Very well written!
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about film
I am a big fan of film.In the past, I always thought that in a good story the most main character must be a charismatic guy person ( it doesn't have to be a man ) who always can makes a the right decision in the end.
Although this guy person isn’t a winner, he or she will still have some more important reason to make you think this guy is right and has integrity.
But recently, i really think I got that ( this or it might be better here) wrong.
I think a good movie can help ( you can't make people feel) people feel understood, if you don’t wanna (never ever use wanna in written work.It isn't a word! use want to) appreciate different people and understand different lives, why do you do this? ( what is this referring to? watching movies? reading books? You need to define this.)
Sad is also beautiful, insufficient is also beautiful.
A story may be attractive because of the imperfection.
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